Thursday, 27 March 2014

Authors Reponse


I am learning to identify and describe what the author wanted me to feel, think about or see.

Success Criteria.
I will know I have been successful when:

  • I can identify what I think the author’s purpose might be
  • I can identify the big idea or message/s in the story through character actions or events
  • I can describe the thoughts, feelings and actions in the story and link it to author purpose
  • I can find evidence in the text to support my thinking, feelings and observations
  • I can identify how the illustrations help to get the author’s message across

I found this tricky because you had to tell the authors purpose
My next step for me is to put the book next to me when I write about it and to look at the success criteria.

Friday, 21 March 2014

Te Tuhi Showcase



I got a lot better at drawing the shape of the head and body 
and to paint in the line and not out.

Thursday, 27 February 2014

Bio Poem




IALT write a bio poem.
S.C.
I know will be successful when I can
- write adjectives that describe me
- write about my feelings
- write about my loves and fears.

It was fun to do this poem.  It was a bit hard to think of an adjective that describe me and my fears
 Next time it can help me if I use a dictionary.

Thursday, 13 February 2014

My welcome post


Kia ora, my name is Yohan.  I enjoy Maths and all sports.  My favourite sport is cross country.  The purpose of my Blog is to show the world what I can do in school.